#54 Speaking Part 2 : Describe an intelligent person you know

 

Who is the person

What does she do?

Why do you think he is smart?

How do you feel about her?

Well, I believe there many smart people that I adore so much in my life. Here, I would like to talk about my bestfriend whose name is Sutria. 

00:23

So, Sutria is my childhood friend whom I met when I was in my high school. At that time, I believe that she was the smartest student in my class. And then, I was right all the time. Actually, she is extremely intelligent person because of her hard work. I reckon that she is very discipline about her study time. And also, he has a very great ambition to become a doctor in my country.

01:04

I believe Sutria has many remarkable academic achievements during her formative years in university. So, when Sutria was a student at this medicine school, she was the best student in her class. And also, she accepted a very prestigious scholarship for her study in this med school. At the end, I could say that I am very proud of my bestfriend because of her achievement and also because of her brilliant thoughts. I could say that she is going to places in the future because of her brighten minds and also because of her big dream to enhance the life quality in my country.

1. I was in my high school. Seharusnya tanpa 'my' karena kan sekolahnya bukan punya elu Sar wkwk
2. "she is extremely intelligent person" harusnya ada artikel indefiniti menjadi "an extremely intelligent person"
3. "she is very discipline" discipline adalah kata bendaa bukan kata sifat wkwk. training that makes people more willing to obey or more able to control themselves, often in the form of rules, and punishments if these are broken, or the behaviour produced by this training:  There should be tougher discipline in schools. | I don't have enough (self) discipline to save money.| Jadi yang tepat adalah disciplined (plus ed) sebagai bentuk kata sifat. 
4. "this medicine school"" wkwkwk maunya medical school oi. medical : med school : a med student: med school a med student
5. "At the end, I could say " Preposisinya salah, maunya pake preposisi 'in' sehingga menjadi 'In the end, I could say that'
6. "because of her brighten minds" wkwk maunya bright minds. KENAPA GA BRILLIANT MIND atau SHARP minds aja sih saar