#60 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a film/movie that made you laugh
What is the name of this movie
When did you watch it
Who you watched it with
Why it made you laugh
Well, there are many comedy movies that I watched. Here, I would like to talk about a movie which is called 'Three Idiots'. So, it is an Indian movie and I watched this movie in 2012 when I was a student in Institute Technology Bandung.
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So, I believe that this movie was very funny because it was related to my student's life in ITB. And, this movie contained of 3 main characters who were the three student in Institute Technology of Engineering somewhere in India.So this movie talked about their struggle to be a successful Indian student in this institution. It talked about the story when they failed in their exams and also it had a very hilarious moment where the main character needed to meet his Rector because he wanted to get his recommendation letter for applying some scholarship.
So I thought that this movie was very funny because it had many similarity with my real life in university. And when I watched it, I also recommended this movies to my other students because I think it could reduce their level of stress.
My self correction :
- "I was a student in Institute Technology Bandung". Kata preposisi yang tepat adalah "at"
- "movie contained of 3 main characters". Seharusnya kata kerja contain tidak diikuti preposisi 'of'
- "who were the three student in". Student harusnya diikuti ending ekstra 's'
- "for applying some scholarship" Ini struktur kalimatnya terbalik, seharusnya "applying for some scholarship programs"
- "it had many similarity with my real life" Kata benda similarity seharusnya diikuti dengan ending ekstra huruf 's' menjadi similarties
- "recommended this movies" Kata benda movies seharusnya singular menjadi "movie" saja
- "to my other students" Kata benda students disini kurang tepat karena jatuhnya speaker berposisi sebagai guru yang memiliki para siswa. Seharusnya yang baik dan benar adalah "to my other friends"
- HINDARI mengulangi kata movie puluhan kali. Akan lebih baik jika menggunakan kata "film" untuk menunjukan bahwa anda mengetahui kumpulan kosakata yang kaya.
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