#64 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a risk you have taken which had a positive result

 What it was

Why you took it

What the result was

How you felt about it

I reckon that as a human being, we should take some risks in order to achieve something that we want. In here, I would like to share my experience when I decided to choose a travel agency to organise my holiday.

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At that time, I really wanted to spend my holiday in Derawan Island. So, in 2016, I decided to pay a travel agency which is Wuki Travel to organise my holiday there. At first, I was very hesitated to use this agent because I didn't know them so well. Although the price was very affordable, I was afraid that this agency couldn't meet my expectation as a traveller.

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So, during my vacation in Derawan Island, Wuki Travel offered me with many good facilities such as a five-star hotels, and also a very friendly tour guide during my vacation there. At the end, I was very statisfied with my experience with Wuki Travel and I hope in the future, I will choose them again as my travel agency when I want to spend my holiday in some new places in Indonesia.

My Self-Correction :

1. "In here, I would like to share " seharusnya langsung "Here, I would like to share"
2. "I was very hesitated" SALAH BESAR ! wkwkw. Hesitated adalah Verb 2 dari kata kerja Hesitate....wkwk hesitate [verb [ I ] : to pause before you do or say something, often because you are uncertain or nervous about it. Seharusnya hesitant [adjective] : If you are hesitant, you do not do something immediately or quickly because you are nervous or not certain. "I was hesitant"
3. "a five-star hotels" duhhh kenapa lagi dan lagi ekstra huruf s :(
4. "offered me with many good facilities" kata kerja offer tidak diikuti preposisi "with". | PREP. to She offered drinks to her guests. | PREP. for They have offered over £500,000 for the house. | Mungkin kata kerja yang cocok adalah "provide" karena PREP. for providing food and shelter for the refugees | with He provided us with a lot of useful information. 
5. "At the end," kalau merujuk kepada ekspresi "finally", preposisi yang benar adalah in the end. Ingat seperti lagu Linkin park aja wkwkw
6. "I was very statisfied" WKWKWK fatal banget ya ini. satisfy [verb [ T ]]to please someone by giving them what they want or need. Jadi seharusnya "I STATISFIED" wkwkwk. Ini tu sama dengan kesalahan pas bilang "I am disagree". Seharusnya langsung I disagree.