#72 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a large company that you are interested in

 

 Which company is it

What it is like (what kind of business it does)

How you know about it

How you feel about it

Why you have interest in this company

So, there are many multinational companies that I've known since I left university. But I think, I really fancy Unilever. So, I thought that this company is very famous company in Indonesia. Because this company has produced many daily products such as the shampoos, and also the soaps. And I think there are other foods and beverages that are also produced by Unilever.

So, I think when I graduated from Institut Teknologi Bandung in 2016. I knew this company was very famous among my friends because there are many ITB students that really want to work at this company. I heard that this company offered a very high salary to its workers. And then, I also know that this company is very famous for its practice because they are very aware with the economic and also the environment. For instance, to support the economic of Indonesia, this company has given many donations to the small enterprise in Indonesia which called UMKM.

Self correction :

1. Terlalu sering memakai kata 'company'. Coba di paraphrasing dengan sinonim yang lain seperti : enterprise, business organization, industry, multinational corporation
2. "company is very famous company" seharusnya menjadi "this company is a very famous company". Kayaknya keseringan banget ya mengulangi kesalahan kurang artikel indefinitif. Mungkin lain kali harus pakai "it is very famous in Indonesia"
   
3. "they are very aware with the economic" seharusnya menjadi "they are very aware of the economy and also the environment". salah pada preposisi 'aware with' seharusnya menjadi 'aware of'
   
4. "For instance, to support the economic of Indonesia" seharusnya menjadi " For instance, to support the economy of Indonesia"