#75 Speaking Part 2 : Talk about a new public building/place, which you would like to visit
Which building/place is t
Where is it
When would you like to visit it
With whom would you like to visit
Why do you want to visit it
There are many new places that I really want to visit someday in the future. But I think, I really want to visit Museum of Macan. So, this museum is located in West Jakarta. If I want to go there, it will going to take for about thirty-minutes of driving by car. And then, when I visit this museum, I really want to see many paintings in there because my friends already told me that this place is very famous for its collection of painting from all over the world.
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In the future, I really want to to visit this museum, with my high school friend. His name is Tito. So, Tito is an art student in Institut Teknologi Bandung for right now. I think it is going to be perfect for me, if I could go to this museum with him. So, he could help me to interpret about the paintings and also the meaning behind all of the paintings in there.
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And also, based on the Google review, this museum is also famous for its park, because it has many collection of beautiful flowers, and also there are many good spot to take some pictures with my friend
. So I think, I really want to visit this museum someday.
Some self corrections :
- I really wan to visit Museum of Macan. Sepertinya kurang artikel indefinitif 'the'. Koreksinya adalah "The Museum of Macan"
- It will going to take.....Ini kesalahan fatal formulasi tensesnya. Koreksi nya adalah "It is going to take "
- Many paintings in there. Kesalahan ini sudah pernah juga dilakukan. Makna kata 'there' sudah mencakup arti 'di sana', sehingga seharusnya tanpa 'in'.
- "Its collection of painting" kehilangan pluralnya. "Its collection of paintings"
- "many collection of beautiful flowers", kehilangan pluralnya menjadi "many collections of beautiful flowers"
- "many good spots" juga kehilangan pluarnya. Seharusnya menjadi "many good spots"
Kesimpulannya adalah pada part ini, sering banget missed pengucapan 'ekstra s', contoh collection of painting, many collections of beautiful flowers, many good spots to take some pictures.
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