#04 Speaking Part 2 : Describe your favorite singer

How do you know this singer

What this person is like

Do you think he/she is good?

Well, in fact I am a huge fan of music. I could say that I listen to many types of music from rock to jazz. Today, I am going to talk about one of my favorite singers all the time and it is Tulus. Tulus is one of the famous singers in Indonesia and I could say that he has a lovely voice. Actually, his music is pop to jazz music. I could say that, one of his greatest songs is Gajah. Actually, in English, this title means elephant. I could say that this song is my favorite songs because the lines in this song is very remarkable and it relate so much with my personal life.

I could say that the first time I had a chance to watch Tulus lively was in 2010. At that time, I attended my graduation party at my school, and I was so excited because my school decided to Tulus as one of the performers at this event. I could say that I was mesmerized by his stunning performance during that event. In the future, I really wish that I could meet Tulus personally. 

 

My self-correction :

1. wkwkwk BERAPA KALI OI MENGGUNAKAN EKSPRESI "I COULD SAY THAT"....ya ampun Sar fatal banget. 6X SELAMA 2 MENIT WKWKW kacau. Coba ganti pakai : I think, I guess, I suppose, I reckon, I believe, I feel
2. "this song is my favorite songs" . Wkwkw seharusnya tanpa ekstra huruf 's' alias menjadi "my favorite song"
   
3. "the lines in this song is very remarkable" . WKWK SUBJECT-VERB agreement nya tidak sesuai. Subject kalimat adalah the lines maka seharusnya menggunakan kata kerja plural yakni ''are"
   
4. "it relate so much with my personal life." Ini masih ada hubungan dengan nomor 3 sih, karena seharusnya pronounnya merujuk pada "the lines of the song" jadi plural maka harus pakai "they"