#06 Speaking Part 2 : Describe an art exhibition that you visited

When you saw this exhibition

Where the exhibition was held

What was on display

And explain your impression of the exhibition

Well, I am going to share my experience when I attended an art exhibition in my town. Actually, it happened in 2018. At that time, my friend asked me to join her visit to Museum Macan. In fact, this museum is located in the heart of Jakarta. Sita, a friend of mine, decided to take Transjakarta because she thought it was the best option for us since it was quite affordable and also it was fast.

I could vividly remember, the first time I arrived at this museum, I was mesmerized because it had a great collection of paintings. As a matter of fact, during our visit there was an art exhibition for Yayoi's paintings. Actually, Yayoi is a Japanese artist. She is quite popular because of her masterpiece. And also she has a great obsession with the object of ball. I could vividly remember, the majority of her paintings were dominated by the object of ball. In the future, I really hope that I could visit many art exhibition because I believe this activity could help me to enrich my knowledge.

My self-correction :

1. Kolokasi kata kerja yang natural untuk kata benda exhibition. attend, go to, see, visit | arrange, organize, plan |
   
2. Painting ternyata adalah kata benda yang bisa bertindak sebagai Countable atau Uncountable.
   
3. Kolokasi kata kerja yang natural untuk kata benda painting . VERB + PAINTING do, execute, paint, work on | Degas did several paintings of ballet dancers.
   
4. Collection adalah kata benda yang countable atau uncountable. Tapi seringnya adalah kata benda countable.
5. "the object of ball." kurang artikel indefinitif "the" seharusnya menjadi "the object of the ball"
   
6. "visit many art exhibition". Karena ada quantifier "many" sudah seharusnya plural sehingga perlu ekstra huruf s ya :)