#08 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a skill that you can teach other people

What it is 

How you learnt it

How can you teach others this skill

How do you feel about this skill

 Well, I am going to talk about one of my skills which is baking skills and usually I love to teach my friends and also my relatives how to bake a cake. Well actually, I've been baking since I was a kid. I guess it runs in my family since my mother was my baking teacher.

I could vividly remember my first cake that I made by myself was a chocolate brownies. Actually, I made it when I was seven years old and it turned out the taste was so delicate and sweet. Many of my relatives adored so much my cake at that time. So, usually my nephew would ask me how to make a cake and I am very fond of sharing my recipes to my relatives. 

I could say that, baking skills is quite hard because it involves a skill about how to mix the ingredients and also we have to understand how to operate some baking machines such as oven and also mixer. In the future, I hope I could open an online class about how to make a cake based on my personal recipes. I could say that it would be a great opportunity.

My self-correction :

1. Skill adalah kata benda Uncountable atau countable hayo ! Kalau berdasarkan Kamus Cambridge, dia bisa sebagai U/C yaa. [ C, usually plural 
2. Collocation kata kerja untuk skill yang perlu diperhatikan :  have, possess | lack | need, require, take, broaden, hone, improve, increase, master, sharpen, upgrade
3. " my first cake that I made by myself". Wkwkwk kalo ini seharusnya menjadi "the first cake that I made by myself was..." atau langsung aja "My first cake was...."
   
4. "was a chocolate brownies." Kalo ini seharusnya tanpa artikel definitif "a"
   
5. "Many of my relatives adored so much my cake" ini salah struktur wkwkwk. Seharusnya : many of my relatives adored my cake so much.
   
6. "sharing my recipes to my relatives." preposisi untuk kata kerja sharing adalah with, | with | She had to share a bedroom with her sister.
   
7. "baking skills is quite hard" Merujuk pada poin nomo 1, kalo emang skillsnya plural, maka seharusnya pake verba "are" bukan "is".