#12 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a time when you had to wait in a long line

When it was

How long the queue/line was

What it was about

How you felt about waiting in this long queue or line

Well, I am going to share my experience when I was stuck in a long queue. And it was a time when I accompanied my mother to see a doctor. Actually, it happened in 2019. At that time, my mother suddenly caught a flu because it was raining weather. So I guess, it was quite common for us as human beings to catch some influenza viruses during this kind of weather.

So I decided to take my mother to the biggest hospital in my hometown. I could say that it was the peak hours because when we arrived and I signed up for my mother's, it was so long because I already received the queue number for about 10 from 20. I guess it was so long. We spent for about 2 hours only for waiting to see this doctor. I could say that in the future, I hope that the government in my hometown could improve this hospital facilities especially they should provide more schedules of doctors. So as the patients, we shouldn't wait this long to just see one doctor for one day.

My self-correction :

  1. "my mother suddenly caught a flu". Seharusnya pake the flu. Karena sudah spesifik merefer ke virus influenze
  2. "this hospital facilities" ini seharusnya ada ekstra huruf s dibunyikan sebagai tanda kepunyaan menjadi "this hospital's facilities"
  3. " to just see one doctor for one day."  ini kebalik strukturnya wkwk seharusnya menjadi "just to see one doctor for one day"








Komentar