#14 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a place you like to visit but you dont want to live there

What place is it

When do you visit that place

How you feel about it

Why you dont want to live there

Well, I am going to talk about a place where I visited in the past but I don't want to live there in the future. And it is my grandmother's house. In fact, my grandmother's house is located in a small village called Jebus. I suppose this village is quite isolated because it doesn't have any proper health facilities such as hospitals. And also, it doesn't have a good education system. I suppose as a young person, it is not an ideal place for me to grow up. 

As a matter of fact, I could vividly remember, the last time I visited my grandmother was in 2018, before there is no corona virus pandemic like today. I could vividly remember, I took my mother and my grandmother to have a lunch together in one of the famous restaurant at that village. I could say that my grandmother was so happy because she could see me and she always asked me about my future especially who I was dating. 

In the future, I really hope that I could visit my grandmother more frequently.

My self-correction :

1. "a place where I visited in the past" kayaknya daripada menggunakan conjunction where akan lebih baik menggunakan "that" wkwk
2. "before there is no corona virus pandemic like today." maunya konsisten pake PAST TENSE ya sehingga menjadi "before there was no corona virus pandemic as today"
3. "to have a lunch together" karena konteksnya makan siang yang general, maka tidak perlu ada artikel indefinitif a lunch tapi langsung saja to have lunch
   
4. "one of the famous restaurant" lagi lagi kurang ekstra huruf s
   
5. "at that village."PREP. in a/the ~ They live in a farming village. | outside a/the ~ Our cottage is just outside the village. Jadi kolokasi preposisi yang benar untuk kata tempat village adalah in.