#20 Describe a piece of international news that you have recently heard
What the news was about
Where and when you heard it
What you were doing when you heard it
Explain how you feel about this news
Well, I am going to share my experience when I heard an international news. Actually it was about the coronavirus vaccine. At that time, I was spending my spare time by reading my favorite book. And then, when I watched television during my reading, I heard that some international researchers all around the world had invented this vaccine. And the efficiency of this vaccine was actually above fifty percent which was good.
I could say that I was quite relieved because I believe this pandemic is going to be over soon. As a matter of fact, last week I had been vaccinated at my office. I guess because I work as a civil servant, so the government of Indonesia has prioritized civil servants as the main target for vaccine programs.
In the future, I really wish that our government could give vaccine to everyone so it could create a herd immunity. I believe it is the right for everyone in my country to be vaccinated because it could help them to be not worrying about this virus anymore. Especially for the people who have a very mobile work.
My self-correction :
- NEWS itu adalah kata benda uncountable ya ampun Saraah T__T kenapa sih suka skip muluk !
- "when I heard an international news" ini salah, kalo memang mau ada artikel indefinitif 'a' harusnya ditambahkan 'a piece of international news"
- " some international researchers all around the world had invented this vaccine" Akan lebih tepat jika kata benda yang digunakan adalah scientist daripada researcher
- "our government could give vaccine" kurang artikel indefintif 'the'
- "it could create a herd immunity." OMG ! Ternyata herd immunity aja dianggap sebagai uncountable noun.....WKWKW kzlll ! herd immunity noun [ U ] :Herd immunity occurs when enough people in a population are immunized against a disease so that it also protects the unvaccinated.
- "the main target for vaccine programs." disini seharusnya tidak ada ekstra huruf s
- "I believe it is the right"dalam konteks ini artikel definitifnya kurang tepat
- "it could help them to be not worrying about" INI FATAL BGT wkwkwk susunan kalimatnya. yang benar adalah "it could help them not to be worried about this virus"
- "the people who have a very mobile work." INI JUGA SALAH iih. Work adalah uncountable noun sehingga seharusnya tanpa artikel indefintif 'a'
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