#22 Speaking Part 2 : Describe an unforgettable bike trip

When it was

Where you went

What happened during the trip

How you felt about it

Well, I am going to share my experience when I joined a cycling event in Jogjakarta city. Actually, it happened in 2018. At that time, one of my friends who lives in Jogjakarta city asked me to join this race because she knows that I am a keen cyclist.

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And I would say yes, of course ! I would join this event ! So, during this event, the main destination was Borobudur temple. So, during the trip I could see many amazing scenery and I was mesmerized. Even though I was so tired after cycling from the heart of Jogjakarta city to Borobudur temple, I could say that I satisfied to join this event because I made many friends and also it could enhance my physical capability.

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Recently, I rarely do my cycling because I could say that I am too busy with my work at the office. And also, because nowadays there is a Coronavirus pandemic so it is very hard for me to manage my time well during this pandemic.

However, in the future, if Coronavirus pandemic is over, I will join other cycling events especially cycling event that held by Bali government.

My self-correction :

1. many amazing scenery. SCENERY adalah kata benda UNCOUNTABLE oiii ! Jadi ga seharusnya ada kata quantifier "many"
   
2. I satisfied to join this event. Nah ini baru tau, kalo ternyata satisfy itu bisa sebagai kata kerja, dan dia bisa juga sebagai kata sifat (tapi berubah bentuk menjadi satisfied). Tapi ada syaratnya kalau mau digunakan sebagai kata kerja yakni harus ada kata benda yang mengikuti, agar mengindikasikan siapakah objek dari kata kerja satisfy yang telah kita puaskan.
   
3. "if Coronavirus pandemic is over" ini kurang artikel indefinitif "the" aja ya.
   
4. "especially cycling event that held by Bali government." Nah ini udah bener kalo collocation kata kerja untuk kata benda event adalah hold, tapi harusnya dalam bentuk passive voice. contohnya VERB + EVENT hold | The event will be held in the grounds of the manor house.|