#24 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a time when you were really close to a wild animal

What it looked like 

Where you saw it

what it likes to eat or do

Why you like it

Well, I am going to share my experience when I swam around a gigantic fish which was a shark whale. I believe that this fish is one of the endangered animals in my country. Because there are many researchers in this world believe they are going to be extinct in the future.

Well, actually my trip happened in 2018. At that time, I decided to have a short trip to Derawan Island by myself. So, during the trip, the visitors could do diving with this fish because actually, they were not very harmful as the other sharks. So, even though I was very afraid of swimming around this shark whale, at the end I could say that I enjoyed it so much because I was mesmerized. They were so huge and I really wanted to touch them , but my tour guide asked everyone not to touch this fish because it could sometimes annoyed them. 

So, in the future, I hope Indonesia government could do many programs in order to protect the existence of this fish because I really want to take my children to visit this island. 

My self-correction :

1. "there are many researchers in this world believe they are going to be extinct in the future."wkwkw ini kata katanya bisa ambigu karena akan merujuk they ini adalah para penelitinya yang akan punah. Jadi seharusnya "this fish is going to be extinct"
   
2. "could do diving with this fish" Menurut kamus, collocation nya kata kerja yang natural untuk kata benda diving adalah "go" bukan do
   
3. "at the end I could say" INI SALAH MULU wkwkwk. In the end oi ! inget lagu linkin park.
   
4. "it could sometimes annoyed them." ini ga harus pake qolqolah -ed yaa kapan kapan wkwk.
   
5. "I hope Indonesia government" ini kurang artikel "the"