#27 Describe a famous person that you are interested in

 

Who this person is

How you know about this person

What sort of life they had before they became famous

How this person became famous

And explain why you like this person

Okay, I am going to talk about a famous actor that I adore so much in my country. He is Mr. Reza Rahardian. So, I could vividly remember the first time I knew about this person was the time when I watched one of his famous movies which called the Movie of Mr.BJ Habibie.

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At this movie, Mr. Reza played as our former president and I could say that his acting was marvelous during this movie. No wonder if he got many awards from this movie. For instance, he could speak well Germany during this movie. I mean, his pronunciation was so convincing. I thought there were some moments where Reza Rahardian was not as famous as now. I read in some newspapers, he was only a model for a magazine before he joins to have a career in film industries. 

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And I think he became famous because of the film of BJ Habibie. The funny thing is when I went to a cinema to watch an action movie with my friends, I met him accidentally because he attended a movie launching so I asked for his autograph and also I wanted to take some pictures with him and he said yes.

My self-correction :

1. "which called the Movie of Mr.BJ Habibie." Ini salahnya kurang kata kerja is , karena kita ingin menjadikan passive voice sehingga seharusnya menjadi "which is called the Movie of Mr. BJ Habibie"
   
2. At this movie. Seharusnya menggunakan preposisi "in" sehingga menjadi "In this movie"
   
3. he joins to have a career in film industries.Ini ada banyak kesalahan sih sebenernya. Pertama kesalahan tidak mencantumkan artikel indefinitif "the". Kedua tidak harus diikuti ekstra huruf s untuk industry (meskipun dia bisa menjadi countable dan uncountable). Jadi seharusnya dari kalimat aslinya adalah film industries seharusnya menjadi the film industry. LALUUU, kesalahan terakhir adalah tidak cocok konteks kata kerja "join" disini. Seharusnya menjadi "He decided to join the movie industry" atau menjadi "he decided to pursue his career in the movie industry"