#30 Describe a thing you bought and you are happy about

Explain why you bought it

Why you selected this product

From where you purchased it

And explain why you are so happy about it

I reckon that I am a shopaholic, so there were many products that I brought and all of them could make me very happy. Here, I would like to share my experience when I bought my Iphone 7.

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I could say that at that time, my phone was broken. So, I guess it was crucial for me to have a new phone. After searching some brands in the internet, I chose to buy Iphone 7 because it was a state-of-the-art phone during that era. I could vividly remember I went to one of the famous shopping centers in South Jakarta which is Kota Kasablanka. I went there with my best friend and he accompanied me to buy this phone in Ibox, one of the famous Iphone stores in Indonesia.

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I guess it costed me for around 10 million rupiahs at that time. I had a large amount of money because I had dreamed to buy this iphone for a long time. So, actually this Iphone was blueish because I really fancy blue color and also it had many features such as the camera had a very high resolution and also there were many good applications that I installed.

My self-correction :

1. Dream adalah kata benda countable. Dia bisa juga bertindak sebagai kata kerja. 
2. "that I brought" ini pronounciation nya salah ya, kata kerja yang dimaksud kan maunya BUY wkwk bukan BRING. Jadi seharusnya I bought.
   
3. " some brands in the internet" Preposisi untuk internet adalah "on" jadi seharusnya menjadi : on the internet. PREP. on the ~ More and more people are shopping on the Internet.
   
4. "I had dreamed to buy this iphone" duh kesalahan ini berulang terus euy. Inget ya sar, collocation kata kerja dream itu biasanya preposisi about atau of. jadi seharusnya i had dreamed of buying this phone.