#31 Talk about a time when you gave advice to someone

 Who you gave advice to

What the advice was

Why you gave the advice

And how you felt about the advice

Well, I could say that I am very fond of giving advice to my friends and also to my relatives. I guess, they consider as one of the wisest people in their life. But here, I would like to share my experience when I gave my advice to my childhood best friend whose name is Sutria.

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So, I know Sutria for a long time. Actually, I met her for the first time when I was a student at my primary school.So, at that time, I could vividly remember Sutria cried so many times for her ex boyfriend. And I told it was very bad for her because her former boyfriend cheated on her. I told her to let him go and to move on because he was not worth her. And also, I tried to convince her that it was the best thing for her. As a matter of fact, I reckon that she had a very toxic relationship with this man because she loved to lie many times to her. So actually, in the end Sutria could move on and I was so proud of her and I could say that I was quite relieved.

My self-correction :

1. Advice adalah kata uncountable. Berdasarkan kamus Cambridge, advice noun [ U ], oleh karena itu dia tidak diikuti huruf ekstra s dan bukan plurar ya. Contoh kalimat : My advice is to go by train | Steven gave me some good advice.|
   
2. And I told it was very bad for her. Disini kurang kata benda setelah kata kerja told, seharusnya menjadi "And I told her that it was very bad"
   
3. because she loved to lie many times to her. Ada dua kesalahan ya di sini. Pertama adalah yang bohong adalah cowoknya, jadi subject nya harus "he" bukan "she". Lalu ada struktur kalimat yang terbalik seharusnya menjadi "he loved to lie to her so many times". Preposisinya udah bener tapi menjadi "to"