#32 Describe something important that has been kept in your family for a long time
When you family had it
How your family got it
And explain why it is important for your family
I would like to talk about my family legacy that we got from our great grandfather which is a sword. As a matter of fact, my great grandfather was a soldier who helped my country to gain our independency.
00:25
I could vividly remember the time when my grandmother used to tell me that my great grandfather had killed many Dutch soldiers by using this sword. And also, some people in my village believe that this sword has a magic power. That is why, my father decides to keep this object in a wooden box. And also, only my father knows where is the location of this wooden box.
01:08
My father told me that he wished that in the future, there will be a great collector that want to purchase this sword with a high price. However, I didn't agree with his idea because I told him that it was better for our family to keep this sword because it has many historical and also unforgettable memory for our family. At the end, my father still insisted that this sword is going to be a good investment for our family in the future. Well, what can I say, right?
My self-correction :
- to gain our independency. Kalau di kamus cambridge seharusnya menjadi independence noun [ U ]
- this sword has a magic power. Power adalah uncountable sehingga harus tanpa diikuti artikel indefinitif menjadi has magic power
- a great collector that want to purchase. Kurang ekstra huruf s karena subject nya adalah singular , menjadi "a great collector that wants to purchase"
- this sword with a high price. Ini ingat ya ketika menulis writing task 1, seharusnya menggunakan preposisi 'at'
- many historical and also unforgettable memory. Ini sama seperti poin nomor 3, seharusnya ada ekstra huruf s sehingga menjadi "many historical and also unforgettable memories"
- At the end. Ini juga preposisinya salah, seharusnya "in". Inget kata jeff, inget lagu Linkin Park.
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