#35 Speaking Part 2 : Talk about a toy you liked in your childhood

 

What was the toy
Who gave it to you
How often did you play with it

Well, I reckon that when I was a young girl, I was rather fond of playing with many dolls. I could say that I had seventeen dolls in my room.
But here I would like to talk about my favorite doll at that time , it was a barbie doll.

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So, I gave this barbie doll a name. Her names is Janine because at that time I had my favorite TV shows and the main character name was Janine. This doll was normal like other barbie dolls. Janine had a blond hair and also white skin and I could say that I had many collection of Janine's clothes especially dress.

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I could vividly remember that I fancied Janine when I wore her her pink dress that was so beautiful and lovely. Actually I got this doll from my mother when I celebrated my birthday party. It was in 1999. At that time, I really wanted to have a barbie doll because it was quite famous. And my mother decided to bough me one because I got the first rank at my school.

 

1. " Her names is" seharusnya tanpa ekstra huruf 's' sehingga menjadi her name is
   
2. "the main character name was Janine." seharusnya ada possessive yakni huruf s sehingga menjadi 'the main character's name was"
   
3. "This doll was normal like other barbie dolls." Normal agak aneh ya...maunya reguler aja
   
4. "Janine had a blond hair" hair adalah uncountable, seharusnya tidak memiliki artikel definitif a
   
5. "I had many collection" seharusnya ada ekstra huruf s pada collection sehingga menjadi collections
   
6. " I wore her her pink dress" ini seharusnya tidak doble her....lalu terkesan Saya menggunakan wkwk bukan bonekanya
   
7. "my mother decided to bough" rumusan kata kerja infinitive adalah to+verb 1 jadi seharusnya to buy