#36 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a country where you would like to work for a short time

 

Where you would like to work

What kind of job would it be

When would you like to go

Why you want to work there

Well, I think that if I had a chance to pursue my career in some national or multinational companies in other countries, I would like to work in France especially in the city of Lyon or Nantes. Actually, I really want to become a nuclear researcher in these cities because actually most of the energy production in French is originated from Nuclear Energy. Because French people are fond of producing energy from clean sources except coal.

They believe that nuclear energy is more eco-friendly than other energy sources. In my opinion, I would like to begin my career in French five years from now. Because it is going to be a perfect time when I already have many working experience in Indonesia. I could say that, I really want to pursue my career in French because I want to practice my French. Actually, I've already learning French for around five years now. And also, I really want to know many French culture especially about their culinary.


My Self-Correction :

  1. "except coal" Harus ada tambahan for pada lazimnya. Contoh di kamus Cambridge : Everyone was there except for Sally | There is nothing to indicate the building's past, except for the fireplace.
  2. "have many working experience in Indonesia." Experience adalah kata benda yang bisa uncountable maupun countable. Dalam konteks ini countable karena ada quantifier many sehingga harus ditambah ekstra huruf s.
  3. "I've already learning French" INI SALAAAH wkwk mau sok sokan pake rumus Keith jadi lupa kan. Inget kata Keith "I've been driving since I was at university". Jadi seharusnya I've been learning French
  4. "I really want to know many French culture" Harus ada preposisi about setelah kata kerja "know" pada lazimnya ya.
  5. "many French culture". Sama seperti experience, culture adalah kata benda yang bisa countable maupun uncountable sehingga seharusnya diberikan ekstra s menjadi "many French Culture"








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