#39 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a tradition in your country

 What is is

Who takes part in it

What activities there are

And explain how you feel about it

I believe that Indonesia has many traditional events because we have a great diversity in culture. But here, I would like to share one of our traditional occasions which is Eid Fitri.

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Actually, Eid Fitri is the biggest day for Moslem people after we have one month full of fasting. However, there is a big difference between Eid Fitri celebration in Indonesia with other countries. For instance, after doing our prayer in the mosque, we will visit our relatives in this Eid Fitri Day because it is very crucial for us to visit relative's houses in order to get a forgiveness from our relatives.

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I could vividly remember the last time I had Eid Fitri celebration was in 2019. At that time, I celebrated this day by visiting my grandmother's house. Especially, during this day we will start the tradition by holding a family gathering. In this event, each family member would give their forgiveness to each other and also after that, we will have a very lovely lunch together.

1. "between Eid Fitri celebration in Indonesia" Kurang artikel indefinitif 'the'. Sehingga seharusnya menjadi 'between the Eid Fitri celebration in Indonesia"
   
2. "in this Eid Fitri Day" ingat yaaa preposisi untuk hari adalah 'on' sehingga seharusnya menjadi 'on this Eid Fitri Day'
   
3. "in order to get a forgiveness". forgiveness noun [ U ] alias uncountable. Ingat kata mister Bernard pas kemarin di koreksi transportation juga. Kedua kata benda ini adalah uncountable sehingga tidak pernah memiliki artikel.