#44 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a time when you saw children behave badly in public
Where it was
What the children were doing
How others reacted to it
And explain how you felt about it
Well, I am going to share my experience when I saw there were a group of children who did a bullying to a little girl.
00:19
So, it happened in 2012. At that time, I wanted to pick up my younger brother at his school. So, while I was waiting for my younger brother, I saw there was a girl who was crying and she was surrounded by a group of children. And, actually I thought it was very weird because these children laughed at this crying girl. So, I thought there was no one cared enough to stop this bullying. I think, perhaps it was a better idea if I pretended to be her aunt.
01:16
So, I came to that crying girl and I said that I was her aunt and when this group of children knew that I was her relative, they ran away. And then, I was very upset about this behavior. So, I asked about this crying girl why she was crying. And then she told me that that children took her money and also told her that she was ugly. I could say that I was very disappointed with that children behavior.
- "a group of children who did a bullying" Bullying seharusnya tidak diikuti oleh artikel indefinitif
- " I asked about this crying girl" seharusnya tidak diikuti preposisi about karena kalimat keseluruhannya tidak sesuai
- "she told me that that children took her money" that nya tersebut dua kali, akan lebih baik jika diganti possessive pronoun "those children"
- "that children behavior." kelupaan possessive pronoun 's' sehingga menjadi children's behavior
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