#57 Speaking Part 2 : Talk About a prize you want to win
How do you know about it?
What will you do to win it?
Why do you want to win?
Well I suppose there are many prizes that I want to obtain in the future. But here, I would like to talk about my dream by winning a noble prize in the future.
00:21
So, I believe that everyone in this world knows about this noble prize because this prize is given to people who have a remarkable achievement or finding in many fields such as Physics, and also Chemistry, Economy and etc. So, as a student from Physics Department in Indonesia, I really wish I could be a noble leatarieute someday in the future.
01:02
I know it is a big dream but I believe there is nothing impossible in this world. So, firstly I knew about this prize when I was in elementary school after reading a book called Nobel Laureate all around the world. And I could say that, one of many inspiring characters that I adore so much based on this book is Ma'am Marie Curie. Because she was a notable nuclear physicist that I've ever known. So, I believe that in order to achieve this noble prize, I should be very keen on doing my research. And also, I believe that by winning this Noble prize, it could help many people because of our contribution.
My self correction :
- "my dream by winning a noble prize in the future." Collocation preposisi yang benar untuk kata benda dream adalah PREP. ~ of |their dream of a fairer world| . Jadi seharusnya "my dream of winning a noble prize in the future."
- Economy udah benar karena bertindak sebagai noun yeay. Kalo economic itu bertindak sebagai adjektif yakni : B2 [ before noun ] relating to trade, industry, and money.
- WKWKWKW SALAH PRONOUNCE "laureate" seharusnyaaaaaaa. laureate (noun) : a person who has been given a very high honour because of their ability in a subject of study:
a Nobel laureate - "Firstly I knew"WKWKWK Salah ucap kan. Maunya the first time I knew"
- Penggunaan kata I believe nya terlalu berulang dan repetitive.
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