#61 Speaking Part 2 : Describe an occasion when you wasted your time

 

Where you were

When it was

What you did

And explain why you think it was a waste of time

There were several occasions that I found as a boring occasion in my life. Here, I would like to share my experience when I had to attend a very boring event in my life which was the meeting that held by Indonesia Polyglot Community.

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So, it happened in 2017 when I joined this community in order to enhance my language skills especially in English and also French. So at that time, I went to a cafe that was determined as a meeting point. And after that, in this occasion, the organizer divided all of the members into several groups to talk about certains topics by using different international languages. 

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At that time,I could vividly remember that I was grouped into French group. So, during the conversation, we need to talk about French Culture. And at some points, I found it was very boring because the participants were not very active and also I think their French were not very fluent. So , it was very hard to speak about our ideas and also expressing our argumentations during the conversation. 


My Self-Correction :

  1. "several occasions that I found as a boring occasion"  lebih baik jika konsisten ya sar :) karena depannya sudah plural objeknya...maka ke belakangnya juga harus konsisten menjadi "I found as boring occasions"
  2. "to talk about certains topics" seharusnya ndak perlu ada ekstra huruf s di kata sifat 'certain' nya :(((
  3. "into French group" seharusnya ada artikel indefinitif "a" menjadi "into a french group"
  4. "their French were not very fluent." dalam artian disini seharusnya adalah singular. Maka kata kerja seharusnya adalah "was"
  5. "expressing our argumentations" WKWKW GAK ADA WOYYY KOSAKATA ARGUMENTATON ! Pasti efek bahasa perancis ini ! Kalo bahasa inggris adanya "arugements" :(( wkwk kzl

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