#61 Speaking Part 2 : Describe an occasion when you wasted your time
Where you were
When it was
What you did
And explain why you think it was a waste of time
There were several occasions that I found as a boring occasion in my life. Here, I would like to share my experience when I had to attend a very boring event in my life which was the meeting that held by Indonesia Polyglot Community.
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So, it happened in 2017 when I joined this community in order to enhance my language skills especially in English and also French. So at that time, I went to a cafe that was determined as a meeting point. And after that, in this occasion, the organizer divided all of the members into several groups to talk about certains topics by using different international languages.
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At that time,I could vividly remember that I was grouped into French group. So, during the conversation, we need to talk about French Culture. And at some points, I found it was very boring because the participants were not very active and also I think their French were not very fluent. So , it was very hard to speak about our ideas and also expressing our argumentations during the conversation.
My Self-Correction :
- "several occasions that I found as a boring occasion" lebih baik jika konsisten ya sar :) karena depannya sudah plural objeknya...maka ke belakangnya juga harus konsisten menjadi "I found as boring occasions"
- "to talk about certains topics" seharusnya ndak perlu ada ekstra huruf s di kata sifat 'certain' nya :(((
- "into French group" seharusnya ada artikel indefinitif "a" menjadi "into a french group"
- "their French were not very fluent." dalam artian disini seharusnya adalah singular. Maka kata kerja seharusnya adalah "was"
- "expressing our argumentations" WKWKW GAK ADA WOYYY KOSAKATA ARGUMENTATON ! Pasti efek bahasa perancis ini ! Kalo bahasa inggris adanya "arugements" :(( wkwk kzl


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