#65 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a mistake you have made

What is it

When you made it

How you made it

How you felt about it

I believe there were many mistakes that I've made in the past because as a human being, I guess, it is quite normal for us to make mistakes. However, here I would like to talk about a mistake that I made when I was in junior high school.

00:30

So in 2015, I got a very bad score in mathematics class. And then at that time, I was afraid to tell my mother the truth about this score because I didn't want to disappoint her at that time. However, my mathematic teacher asked every student to collect the signature of our parents on the paper of our test because  I believe that my mathematic teacher wanted to make sure that our parents knew about this final exam's result. 

01:20

So, I was confuse at that time. So I decided to lie, then I changed the mark score from 10 to 100 because I add extra zero in the front of the score with my pencil. So, at that time I could say that I felt so bad and I couldn't sleep well during the night because I was afraid that my teacher would caught me on. And then, at the end of the time, I guess, I decided to tell my mother the truth.

1. "I got a very bad score". Hindari kata very, gunakan kata sifat "terrible score/horrible score"
2. "my mathematic teacher asked every student". " my mathematic teacher".  Seharusnya ada extra "s" menjadi  "my Mathematics Teacher"
3. "I was confuse" seharusnya ada penekanan -ed dibelakang menjadi "I was confused"
4. "I changed the mark score" WKWKWK sebenernya mark sudah bermakna : [mark noun/(US usually grade)] : a judgment, expressed as a number or letter, about the quality of a piece of work done at school, college, or university. What mark did you get in the biology exam? 
5. "I add extra zero in the front of the score " memiliki tiga kesalahan. Pertama kurang penekanan -ed dibelakang add. Lalu kurang artikel 'an extra zero'. Kesalahan ketiga adalah "in the front of the score" wkwk maksudnya in the end of the original score. Kan kalo berubah dari 10 jadi 100 wey
6. "that my teacher would caught me on" tidak ada deng collocation untuk ini wkwk. Mungkin lebih baik gunakan "my teacher would realize that I had lied"