#70 Desrcibe a person who is a good leader

Who this person is

How you know this person

What he does

How this person behaves

Why do you think he is a good leader

There are many leaders that I've known since I work in my recent institution. However, here I would like to talk about Mr. Dian Patria. He is my supervisor in my office. So, I've known him for around 5 years now.  Mr. Dian Patria is a senior researcher in the directorate of research and development in KPK. 

So, I could say that, Mr. Dian is a very strict person. He always come right on the time to every meetings, especially any important meetings with a very important clients. And also, I guess Mr. Dian Patria is a very humble person. Even though, I was new in my office, he didn't hesitate to greet me at the first place during my first day at the office.

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And then also, he loved to talk and share about his experience to teach me how to be a good researcher in my office. I could say that, he was so amazing with his style of leadership. I could vividly remember the moment when Mr. Dian had to coordinate the 34 districts all over Indonesia in a kick-off meeting to conduct a research about state budgeting systems.

 

Self Corrections :

1. "He always come" seharusnya pakai 'comes'. Ingat subject verb agreement
2. "come on the time to every meetings" ini fatal banget sih collocationnya. Lebih elok kalau pake : punctual (adjective). Contoh kalimat "He's fairly punctual"
3. Atau collocation yang elok untuk tepat waktu adalah kata kerja "arrive". Contoh kalimat "he usually arrives on time"
4. "every meetings" seharusnya tidak ada ekstra 's' ya Sar ! Suka banget nih salah ! 
5. "a very important clients" tidak konsisten yaaa ekstra 's' nyaa :''')
6. "to talk and share about his experience" seharusnya jika share, tidak diikuti preposisi 'about'. Kecuali jika ucapannya "to talk about his experience". Berikut adalah collocation untuk kata kerja share :
   PREP. among How do you share out three cakes among four people? | between Responsibility is shared between parents and teachers. | in He shared in our enthusiasm for rowing. | with She had to share a bedroom with her sister.