#10 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a special hotel you stayed in

Where it is

What it is like

Why you went there

And how you felt about it

Well, I am going to share my experience when I stayed in a special hotel and it was The Grand Inna Hotel. Actually, this hotel is located in West Java Province, specifically it is in Sukabumi city. It is only for about five hours of driving from Jakarta. I could say that, this hotel is quite big. However, this hotel is old because I could vividly remember the staff told me that this hotel was built in the year of 1945. 

I could say that I visited this hotel in 2018. And in fact, it was a business trip. I stayed in this hotel with my colleague. We decided to choose this hotel because the price was quite affordable. As I remembered, I spent my visit at this hotel by doing a plethora of activities such as swimming and also having a little workout in their gym facility. I could say that, every time I had my breakfast in this hotel, the food was amazing and delicious. And also, the staff were friendly and also helpful.

In the future, I hope that I could take my family to visit this hotel because I want them to know how amazing this hotel is. 

My self-correction :

1. Kata kerja yang cocok untuk kata benda hotel : stay at/in | book in at/into | check in at/into | check out of | Contoh kalimat : We checked into the hotel, then went for a walk along the beachfront.
   We're staying at a cheap hotel near the station.
2. Preposisi yang natural untuk kata benda hotel : at a/the ~ We met at the hotel. | in a/the ~ We're staying in a two-star hotel in the centre of the city.
3. a special hotel . Lebih balik di paraphrase dengan kata sifat lain contoh unique
4. "in the year of 1945"tidak menggunakan preposisi of. Langsung saja menjadi "in the year 1945"
   
5. "I spent my visit at this hotel by doing a plethora of activities". Ini selalu berulang deh. Kalau kata kerja spend tidak diikuti preposisi by sih. Langsung aja