#11 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a person who wears unusual clothes

Who is he

How do you know him

What kind of clothes he wears

Why do you consider that his clothing choices are weird

Well, I am going to talk about Mr.Bob Sadino, because I think he is a person with unusual clothes of choice. Actually, Bob Sadino is a successful businessman in Indonesia. I suppose he has many business chains that ranging from food to industries of manufacturing. 

I think Bob Sadino is very fond of using short pants to any occasions regarding it is a formal occasion or informal one. I guess he is very proud of his choice of wearing this short pant because he wants to show to everybody that doesn't matter what brands of clothes you choose, it doesn't mean anything about yourself. I could vividly remember in 2013 when I was a student at university, I attended a public seminar and one of the speakers in that seminars was Mr.Bob Sadino. I guess he encouraged the students to pursue our passion in entrepreneurship instead of working for other people. I could vividly remember in that event, he worn a short pant. So I guess, the short pant becomes his identity.

My self-correction :

1. "unusual clothes of choice". Maunya unusual choice of clothes
   
2.  "that ranging from food to industries of manufacturing". Harusnya ada tambahan verb "be" menjadi "that are ranging from food to industries of manufacturing. Oh ya, sebenernya berdasarkan berita, dia hanya bisnis F&B dan hospitality industry.
   
3. "fond of using short pants to any occasions" WKWKWK disini ada tiga kesalahan. Pertama collocation untuk kata benda pakaian, adalah selalu wear. Lalu yang kedua salah preposisi, karena kalau kata benda occasion selalu diikuti preposisi nya on. Contohnya PREP. on an/the ~ The police were called out on 24 separate occasions. | on ~(s) He has even been known to go shopping himself on occasion. Kesalahan ketiga adalah kata determiner any biasanya untuk kalimat tanya maupun kalimat negatif, sehingga lebih baik diganti menjadi every.
   
4. "informal one" Disini kurang artikel indefinitif "a" sehingga seharusnya menjadi "an informal one". Atau kalau mau aman sih pakai kalimat gini aja "it is a formal or informal event"
   
5. " he wants to show to everybody "wkwk kata kerja show lazimnya tidak diikuti oleh preposisi apapun. Langsung saja ke kata benda nya , hal ini sama seperti kata kerja share/discuss, tidak ada preposisi.
   
6. "he encouraged the students to pursue our passion in entrepreneurship ". Ada ketidakkonsistenan yakni the students disini kan jatuhnya general, seharusnya dipasangkan dengan pronoun "their". Nah kalau objeknya "us" baru cocok dengan pronoun "our"
   
7. he worn a short pant. WKWKWK FATAL BANGET. Kata kerja kedua dari wear itu wore woy !