#23 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a computer/phone game you enjoy playing since your childhood
When you started playing it
How often you play this game
Why you enjoy playing it
Well, I am going to talk about one of the famous child games when I was young and it was Tetris. So, Tetris is a game where all of the players should arrange some blocks based on their geometric forms. I could say that, this game was quite popular in my era because it was quite easy to play. And also, a gameboy, tools to play this game was quite affordable. As a matter of fact, every kid in my neighborhood had this gameboy. So, sometimes we were very fond of playing together to spend our weekends.
01:02
I could vividly remember, my father bought me a gameboy after I got my first rank at my school. He wanted to give me a reward because of my hard work. I could say, my gameboy was blueish because blue was my favorite color at that time. I would play Tetris with my gameboy together with my neighbors and usually my brother and me played together Tetris because we wanted to compete each other.
01:46
In the future, I hope that Tetris is going to be popular again because I believe this game could enhance our creativity while we play this game.
My self-correction :
- "tools to play this game was quite affordable." ini seharusnya singular menjadi "a tool to play this game was quite affordable"
- "usually my brother and me played together Tetris". Ini seharusnya bukan menjadi "me" tapi harusnya menjadi I karena dia subjek bukan objek :)
- "to compete each other" seharusnya ada preposisi with.
- "I hope that Tetris is going to be popular again" secara grammair formatnya benar, tapi secara konteks situasi kalimat itu gak benar karena dia bukan aktivitas yang sedang berlangsung sehingga seharusnya menjadi "I hope that Tetris could be popular again"
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