#26 Describe a part of a city or a town you enjoy spending time in

 

Where it is

What it is like

What do you do there

And explain why you enjoy spending time there

Well, I am going to talk about a part of my hometown that I adore so much and it is our public library. Actually, this place is strategically located. It is in the heart of our hometown. Usually, it only takes for around twenty minutes of driving my motorcycle to go to this place. 

I guess, this public library has a great collection of many books with different range of books, from textbooks to magazines. Even though nowadays I rarely visit this building, I used to very keen on going to this library when I was a young girl.So, from 2009, I was fond of visiting this library with my brother because we fancied book so much at that time. I could vividly remember we knew Mrs. Heni very well. She was a civil servant who worked for our government to keep this library. 

In the future, I hope that our public library could have some major renovations such as repainting it walls and also perhaps by throwing some attractive events during the weekend, so it could attract many citizen to visit this library in the future.

My self-correction :

1. "with different range of books". Disini range adalah kata benda countable yaa. Kesalahan umum, kelupaan nambah ekstra huruf s diakhir kata benda range seharusnya menjadi "with different ranges of books"
   
2. "So, from 2009," Ini salah sih preposisinya. Seharusnya in 2009.
   
3. "I used to very keen on going" INI SALAAAH WKWK. KEEN itu kan kata sifat iih :( jadi seharusnya I used to be a keen visitor.
   
4. "it could attract many citizen" Ini sama seperti poin pada nomor 1, kurang ekstra huruf s maunya menjadi "citizens"