#34 Speaking Part 2 : Describe a goal you want to achieve in the future
What the goal is
What would you do to achieve it
When will you achieve
Explain why you want to achieve it
Well, I reckon that as human beings, it is very common for us to have a dream that we want to achieve in the future. I could say that I am a big dreamer since I was a kid. Here, I would like to talk about one of my biggest dreams in my life which is being a Nobel Laureate in the future.
00:31
I think this Nobel Prize is very famous all around the world, because this price is very prestigious and everyone who got his price means that they have already give great contribution for our society. Therefore, in order to be a Nobel Laureate in the future, I could say that I must do several research that are related to anti-corruption and also that are related to make the world peace.
01:22
I think I will get this Nobel Prize when I am 50 years old because at that time, I believe that I will have many contribution through my research in order to fulfill the world peace especially the world where there is no longer corruption. I could say this prize is very important for me.
My self-correction :
- "one of my biggest dreams" Seharusnya menggunakan kata dengan artikel indefinitif yang plural. Contoh "one of the biggest dreams"
- they have already give great contribution for our society . Ada dua kesalahan, yakni collocation kata kerja untuk contribution adalah make, bukan give. Lalu seharusnya karena ada "they have" rumusannya harus diikuti kata kerja Verb 3 menjadi given/made
- for our society . Lalu yang kedua adalah untuk kata kerja contribution biasanya diikuti kata preposisi "to", bukan "for".| PREP. to | a valuable contribution to science
- several research that are . Ini yang dikoreksi Mr.Arya dan juga ditekankan oleh Mr.Bernard bahwa seharusnya research adalah kata benda uncountable ! Jadi tidak benar quantifiernya
- that are related to make the world peace. Ini salah penggunaannya, konteksnya double verb. Menurut kamus Cambridge : relate to sb/sth — phrasal verb [C1] to be connected to, or to be about someone or something. | Chapter 9 relates to the effects of inflation on consumers.
- I will have many contribution . Ini kesalahan pada ekstra huruf s, karena ada quantifier many seharusnya menjadi "contributions"
- to fulfill the world peace . Tidak ada artikel indefinitif 'the' dalam kata benda world peace
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