#43 Speaking Part 3 : Describe an energetic person that you know

 

Who this person is

How you know this person

Why you think this person is energetic

And explain how you feel about this person

Well, I reckon that there are many energetic people that I know in my life. Here, I would like to talk about one of my colleagues at the office whose name is Cumi.

00:23

So, Miss Cumi is a very lovely person. She's quite tall and also she has brown hair. I could vividly remember the first time I met Miss Cumi was in 2012. At that time, I was on the same team with her to carried out a research about education system in our country. I think Miss Cumi is the most energetic person that I met because she is a sport enthusiast.

01:08

I believe that one of her sport favorite activities is cycling because she always uses her bicycle whenever she goes to the office. And also, because of her hobby at doing sport, she has a very slimming body.  I could say that I adore her obsession to doing many sport activities in her life because she is also very fond of eating many healthy food such as fruit, vegetables and also green vegetables such as spinach.

My Self-Correction :

1. "to carried out a research" ingat rumusan verba infinitif yakni 'to+Verb simple" sehingga seharusnya menjadi 'to carry out". Lalu research adalah uncountable sehingga seharusnya menjadi tanpa artikel indefinitif 'a'. Total perbaikan kalimatnya adalah 'to carry out research'
   
2. "about education system in our country." Di kalimat ini kurang artikel indifenitif 'the' yang seharusnya menjadi 'about the education system in our country'.
   
3. "because she is a sport enthusiast." Ini kejadian pas awal latihan IELTS dulu....setelah kata enthusiast selalu diikuti plural noun nya : cats enthusiast, foods enthusiast. Contoh di kamus Cambridge adalah "a computer-games enthusiast"
4. "one of her sport favorite activities" INI KEBALIK wkwkwkwk. Maunya yang bener adalah 'one of her favorite sports activities"
   
5. "her hobby at doing sport" Preposisi nya yang benar adalah 'of' bukan 'at'.
   
6. "her obsession to doing many sport activities". Disini preposisi yang digunakan juga salah, seharusnya adalah 'of' bukan 'to'. Lalu kata benda sport juga harus plural sehingga perlu ditambahkan ekstra huruf 's'
   
7. "eating many healthy food". Kurang menambahkan ekstra s di kata benda foods. Karena kita menggunakan quantifier 'many'